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Attraction Isn't A Choice by ~adamtraveler:iconadamtraveler:



It starts with penetrating eyes almost inviting by its gentle glare
He begins to softly touch her neck and seductively pull her hair
She enjoys the soft warming touch but tries to resist
She knows she hasn't felt like a woman in years and waits for him to persist

His lips slowly hover her mouth and she knows that he is teasing
Every move in the right place every touch so pleasing
His hands softly glide over her thighs
The soft sending shivers to her spine sparks passion in her eyes
His touches are anticipated just like a game of chess
She moans when he softly pulls and tugs on her breasts

But after all is said and done
She goes back to her life knowing that night was only just for fun
When he calls her, she's distant and cold
He knows this feeling, its familiar and old
For a woman will only enjoy him for one night
But in his heart he falls a victim to her warmth and wants to fight

He sends her chocolates, flowers, letters and a pure white dove
To her it was sex and to him it was love
This isn't the first woman he has fallen for
There were many more

Treat women with love and respect he promised his mother
In return he sees the world through the eyes of a lover
He is told by women that they want a guy that can make their heart grow
But as soon as he pursues a beautiful woman, she doesn't want to know

A lovers life can be a cruel and painful life
It may sometimes feel like his heart has been stabbed to pieces with a knife
But a lovers spirit will always be at Joyce
Because deep down attraction isn't a choice
©2008-2009 ~adamtraveler
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Author's Comments

My very first poem

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:iconsydney881:
wow..... it's really good this is your first poem? I have written some but I sound more like Dr. Suess than a real poet like Edgar Allen Poe. Oh well, this poem is awesome and beautiful and sad but overall it's just awesome.

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:iconsugar-lust:
This is beautiful. Your first poem? Wow...

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:iconblueisyourcolor:
this is very well-written.

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"A dream itself is but a shadow."
:iconadamtraveler:
Thank you and you have very beautiful well-clear eyes.
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:iconxamee:
kinda autobiographical...perhaps? =D

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" There are things known and things unknown...
And in between are the doors. " - Jim Morrison
:iconadamtraveler:
Yes but the difference is ... I get the girl and keep her ;)
:iconxamee:
nice :XD:

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" There are things known and things unknown...
And in between are the doors. " - Jim Morrison
:iconperfectly-unperfect3:
Seems alittle backwards on the feelings
which intreges me...
I love it though..
i think its great

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-The girl who survived

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March 8, 2008
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